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Fall
Contributed by
sexygirl
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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It's a beautiful day the sun is so bright
It lights my way as I walk in the early morning hour
I paused a moment to look at some ducks floating in a pond in the sunlight
Fragrance of freshness surrounds me with wild flowers
The leaves on the trees are starting to change colors as they float to the ground
With an artist pallet, aray of colors that nature has set in my hand
I sit by a tree, close my eyes and listen to the sounds
This couldn't of been a better day if it was planned
Beneath my feet as I walk , I can hear the snap of small twigs in distress
A hallow branch on the ground, when opened revealed some honey comb
Pictures taken with my camera in hopes of success
The cool crisp air is so refreshing as I make my way home
Copyright ©
sexygirl
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2003-04-16 05:05:00]
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Re: Fall
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:17:50 AM AEST
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beautiful!
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Re: Fall
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 12:24:47 AM AEST
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hmm this was very good. not poetry really, but the imgery and word usage was outstanding, ths had a very calming and peaceful effect on me, thanks for sharing, i hope to be reading more from you soon. peace and love,
DR |
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