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Traits That Take To Great Heights
Contributed by
mvvenkataraman
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Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 10:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Never weep, never weep
And foolishly lose the deal
Ever keep, please ever keep
All your zest and strong zeal
Let anger sleep, anger sleep
For others, you must kindly feel
Be cheerful and show affection
A kind man gets God's benediction
The best man shows in action
Never worry, never at all worry
As it is a fully wrong practice
Love you carry, love you carry
To live life with joyful ease
Have merry, soon have merry
To get from God eternal peace
M V VENKATARAMAN
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Re: Traits That Take To Great Heights
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 12:56:20 PM AEST (User
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Roses at your feet MV!!!
Marvelous Poetry!
Positive, Merry, No worry, No anger, and the best part of all is Love your Carry! You must be a very happy person MV......When you write poetry, you reveal your heart to me!
Your's is so beautiful, and more poems from You I hope to see!
WELCOME TO YPDC.......You're going to love it here. WELCOME Aboard......we're so glad you're here.......write and have lots of fun without fear!
Warm love,
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Re: Traits That Take To Great Heights
(User Rating: 1 ) by andrewjones12 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 08:02:22 AM AEST (User
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An outstanding feat, with such potential to compete amongst some of the greatest perceived. I am much obliged for this write that will be remembered for the years, months, days and weeks that make up the rest of my life.
Have you had any work published?
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Re: Traits That Take To Great Heights
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 08:15:02 AM AEST (User
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This poem shows so much about your positive outlook on life. I am more of a pessimist, but I have to say you are pushing me to the optimistic side of life with your powerful poetry. I look forward to more of your poetry. Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: Traits That Take To Great Heights
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elisabeth on
Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 12:53:53 PM AEST (User
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Emotions can be deadly, that's why self-contorl is a fruit of the spirit. Lovely write! Keep 'em coming. |
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