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irrevocable metamorphosis.

Contributed by ophelie on Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 04:46:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i. but.
i
try.
i…
i hate the way you would laugh at my ridiculousness
i hate the way your hands look
i hate the way you prayed
i hate the way your body felt you held me

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i hate the way i couldn’t look into your eyes
first
i hate the way you smell
i hate the way you look before
bed
i hated your protectiveness
i hate you stole your first kiss
i hate the way you cared for me
i hate the first night
met
i hate the way you dance
i hate your crushing ego
i hate your wisdom
i hate your razor sharp tongue
blood
i hate your conscious
unconscious
manipulation
…
i hated the way your face caressed mine
i hate the dream
i hate your pictures from africa
i hate the your room
i hate your
strengths
weaknesses
i hate the way you love peanut butter—love—chocolate
i hate the way you still peer into
eyes
my soul
i hate villain
what youve done
i hate your twisted words
i hate the lies you’ve told yourself
i hate your stone heart
i hate your trust
fleeting
i hate those who love you
i hate what you said
only
to me
i hate the peace you felt
i hate what you stole
from me.
--
pieces. give them back. stop playing with the remnants of my heart. go far, far away.
be the monster that you are. don’t care for me. keep saying it was all a lie. crush my
hope. turn the truthfulness into fallacy. the past a mirage. render me indifferent. release me, a cold, barred
heart like yours. that i too, may take my revenge. that i may turn my affliction into my
weapon. that others will fall wounded from my venomous bite. one by one. we turn
each other—and our species multiplies…in vain we carry on according to our deformed
being. your poison runs vein-deep. and i am transformed...a mere aberration of you.
cruel creature.

Copyright Â© ophelie ... [ 2010-06-26 16:46:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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