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Sometimes

Contributed by richard1506 on Friday, 25th June 2010 @ 04:36:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Sometimes
When I thought that you were the one to care,
I loved your eyes and I stoked your hair.
I gave you my heart, now beyond repair.
I miss you

Sometimes
When we planned and plotted that we’d dare
To escape from need and to fly elsewhere
But you hardened your heart, my dearest Claire.
I miss you

Sometimes
When the pain seems more than too much to bear
And you find that you just cannot be there
Then, as my mind slips slowly in despair,
I miss you

Sometimes
When my emotions are open, laid bare
When life is counted in pills on that square
When my grief overcomes that final pair
I miss you

Sometimes
When it seems there’s so little left to spare
And bleak future without you here to share
When my soul recites it’s dying prayer
I miss you

Sometimes
I wish there was no tomorrow
Then I could not miss you more
Than I do
Sometimes.

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Re: Sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 09:15:39 PM AEST
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Great poem. You express a great deal of emotion here. Emotion leads to great poetry like the one you posted here.

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