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I miss you.
Contributed by
bambam080296
on
Friday, 25th June 2010 @ 03:49:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The day i lost you was the day i died.
The day i changed and badley cried.
The time in which we spent far apart
i only wanted it in distance, but this time it was in heart.
It felt like half of me was gone.
Like half pf the bright shinning sun.
I cried my heart out, in so much pain.
Hoping oneday you would gain..
Gain the loss i lost and gained the pain i felt.
For i felt trapped and alone, all i wanted was help.
But you didn't see to care,
You hated me more than i could bare.
I just wanted you, and your love
But now i have no love not even a flying dove.
Now i just wanted to say,
I believed you were perfect in everyway way.
But now you have left me stuck all alone.
No place to go to, home isn't home
Now your gone i just want one last thing
For you to not hate me nor like me, but just to be free.
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Re: I miss you.
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by unkn0wnXpo3t on
Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 05:34:58 AM AEST
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i can relate. sucks when u see them slipping away infront of you. great write and full of emotion. i felt it.
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Re: I miss you.
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by takeahittariq on
Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 08:23:15 AM AEST
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| nice poem. ive written a similar one its called my last goodbye... its the worst thing for someone to go through dont you think? who are you talking about may i ask? |
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