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My ode to Elina
Contributed by
Eagle
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Friday, 25th June 2010 @ 08:17:14 AM in AEST
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The girl with the heavenly sky blue eyes
I see her vision each morning when I arise,
And when I go to my desktop, I see her face
I long to hold her in my warm embrace,
To see her sweet words in my inbox folder
Once again my heart begins to smoulder,
Over and over I read her verse
Only for her to confess that the words are not hers,
When each line I drool over seems to perfectly fit true
Why have I offered up my feelings for her to renew,
I tell myself, that she should never be other than a friend
But I am sure that my love for her will never end,
The time and distance between us begins to disappear
Soon the day will arrive when I can welcome her near,
One kiss from her peach coloured lips would diminish the beast
And on each other’s fragrances we both could feast,
To hear her velvet voice each day is my only desire
Although one day, we may have to jump into the fire,
I know to do this would lead to our demise
Oh, how can I resist the girl with the heavenly sky blue eyes.
By John Connolly
Copyright ©
Eagle
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2010-06-25 08:17:14]
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Re: My ode to Elina
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by northernlights on
Friday, 25th June 2010 @ 08:34:13 AM AEST
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| What a dilemma straight from the heart and a lovely write |
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Re: My ode to Elina
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th June 2010 @ 04:47:44 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Awesome write.
Are you kin to the singer, John Connolly?
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: My ode to Elina
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 12:58:42 AM AEST
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| a fantastic piece of writing, heartfelt and well expressed. well done. |
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Re: My ode to Elina
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by voyage on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 01:26:59 AM AEST
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| it is oh so lovely and perhaps hard for you, and yet it was a pleasure to read. I enjoyed it very much! Keep us updaed on the progression of the story.... |
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Re: My ode to Elina
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th May 2014 @ 10:12:11 AM AEST
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romantic and sweet, written beautifully,
hugs n' love nessa |
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