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Waiting
Contributed by
Deeya
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Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 04:18:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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As I sit here, waiting for you, I realize that this was a mistake.
A mistake that will never be forgotten, and remembered forever within my heart.
You changed me, thats the least to say.
You hurt me, thats the last i'll ever say.
And what did i get out of loving you?
Just a broken-heart that can never be fixed.
The thought of you still makes me shiver,
But i'm not going to force myself to linger.
I think its time for me to say goodbye,
To everything that we went through.
I still ask myself. Every second, Every day.
Was it worth it?
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Re: Waiting
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 07:28:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem that anyone who has had a broken heart can relate to. I think the experience of love is worth the pain. Great piece of writing
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Re: Waiting
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 11:43:29 PM AEST
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| The price you pay the questions you torture yourself with the painful process you go through and eventually letting go left with was it worth it?Broken heart openly and honestly expressed connecting with all who have gone through this well written. |
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Re: Waiting
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by NewShakespeare on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 03:14:27 AM AEST
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| Reminds me of the classic play 'Waitng for Godot' |
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