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All Over the Place

Contributed by vr2776 on Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 11:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

New Beginnings, Life Changing,
Friends making, Doors Closing
Situations unclear, Questions brewing
Kids Growing, Mind renewing

Money Low, Bills to be paid
Tasks undone, Hours Fade
Job uncertain, frustrations come
No one to blame, No not one

Lessons learned, Lessons taught
Though it leaves me quite distraught
Desires inside, time must wait
Question now, what is fate?

Racing heart, raging storm
Not because anything’s wrong
Just the wheels that are turning
From the questions that are burning

Excited, Expecting something new
No Not Certain what to do
Its time again, and I must wait
Though to wait is what I hate

In the end, it will subside
And the questions will decide
Decide the answers I want to know
Though Confused, Does it show

Mad Hatter, is that me…
Questions, answers, to what will be
Goodbye, Goodnight until next time
I put my thoughts into Rhyme

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Re: All Over the Place (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 02:49:10 PM AEST
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Well expressed, and can totally relate to the feelings running through this well written

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