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Full moon night
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 12:50:57 AM in AEST
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Night won't be so shaded,
no rain clouds in the sky.
The moon she shines upon me
her beauty makes me sigh.
The city seems so quiet
not a breath of wind does stir
maybe it's her magic
put the world in a soft lull.
Again my night is magic
no rain pattering the earth
the moon brings such beauty
my soul within me stirs.
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shelby
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2010-06-24 00:50:57]
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Re: Full moon night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 12:59:33 AM AEST
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This made me think of some hot summer nights we used to spend late up at night back when I was a senior in high school. We'd hang on at my friend Bill's house because he had freaking huge yard and we'd camp out. Then we'd run amok causing teenager trouble. The scene you set did that. Excellent, Michelle.  |
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Re: Full moon night
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 02:56:02 AM AEST
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| a lovely write. your words condure up so many memories, well done, look forward to more. |
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Re: Full moon night
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by venkat on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 11:23:26 PM AEST
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| What a peaceful night!!..:-) venkat |
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Re: Full moon night
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by humanity on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 05:53:18 PM AEST
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| if only life were so lovely. |
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Re: Full moon night
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by RAJNANDY on
Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 05:26:53 AM AEST
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A BEAUTIFUL LYRICAL VERSE !
LOVED READING IT !
-RajNandy |
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Re: Full moon night
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 08:56:30 PM AEST
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Still you have the tender brush *smiles*
This is lovely Shelby.
Especially the last stanza.
Blessings
LW
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Re: Full moon night
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by manbeast on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 12:34:45 AM AEST
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it's almost like you avoided something
and you're grateful
and know how to appreciate it
interesting |
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