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pagoda
Contributed by
wazarov
on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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From the window of this prison
staring to the endless horizon
something is unfair
about all this despair
what is the reason
of this treason
still freezing
and always
bleeding.
Copyright ©
wazarov
... [
2003-04-16 01:45:00]
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Re: pagoda
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 03:08:40 AM AEST
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a powerful write...says so much in this short piece...well done.
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Re: pagoda
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:39:53 AM AEST
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wow, it really is unfair...great write...i like how you did this...leave a lot to be pondered... :O)
Great job
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Re: pagoda
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:43:00 PM AEST
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great write! I enjoyed this poem it says so much!!
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Re: pagoda
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 03:54:42 PM AEST
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Great write, Dean...the form is so appropriate.
I felt like I was at that window..
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