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Paper Doll For Never and Ever.
Contributed by
amber_vonhorror
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 08:19:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Sitting by the doorway, i know theres broken glass cutting my legs
But it's true
I can't move without you.
Bottles strewn
From the inside of my bloodstream
Right to outside the door
Maybe a few drops left in some
I must have passed out before I could clean dry the
poison
Cause I'm just a paper doll with a sad addiction to drugs
A calling, an ache a burn that couldnt be erased even by love
I mean thats so ***** sad! That an angel opened his heart for me
Yet I still chose to cut my lines with my credit card
And leave him bleeding in the dark
It's true it's true
Chemicals have my heart and theres nothing I can do!
You know how much I want to love you!
You'll always come second best, even though I hate to say
It hurts me more and more everyday
Please let me pin you dry
You can be my butterfly
Don't let me hurt you anymore
Run away, before.
Before.
Before.
Before.
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Re: Paper Doll For Never and Ever.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampire_Amilia on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 08:53:18 PM AEST
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i like this
great job |
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Re: Paper Doll For Never and Ever.
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by quadira on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 06:55:01 AM AEST
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I like the flow of this and very well written. I especially like the way the poem ends almost fades away and makes you wonder what happens next.
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Re: Paper Doll For Never and Ever.
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by SunshineySam on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 07:27:29 PM AEST
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| I love the way the poem moves, and then slowly fades away and leaves the reader hanging. Wonderful imagery. I love it. |
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