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deliberation consideration
Contributed by
adamski
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 07:09:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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my thoughts lie high, high in a cloud floating by
peace, tranquility, that all important sense of free space
my zone, my grace, my all encompassing lack lustered pace
I want to walk and feel, to see, to touch, to understand a world so grand
you are a human, a person, you see you percieve, you are born with no shackles
you can roam, you can fly on that cloud floating by.
Be what you want to be as life is short.
Wisdom comes at the end of your teachings.
you are taught and you expire, to the soil and the dirt from hence you once came,
fame bares no reasoning, just existence through living.
You are a creation of life that may never be understood.
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Re: deliberation consideration
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by Vampire_Amilia on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 08:55:28 PM AEST
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thats really good i like it
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Re: deliberation consideration
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 03:52:58 AM AEST
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| so very well thought out and so very well expressed. I like it a lot. |
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