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all the things
Contributed by
dillybar
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 11:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wish that I could only see
For a moment, the possibilities inside of me.
All the things I could do,
All the dreams I could make true,
All the wishes in my head,
All the fear I will dread,
All the hopes I embrace,
All the success I could grace,
All the love I create,
All the differences I will trait,
All what will be my fate,
wishing I could see, but with hope comes wait.
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Re: all the things
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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| Great opening two lines and then the encapsulation of looking forward wondering what lies ahead enjoyed this well written |
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Re: all the things
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 01:49:19 PM AEST
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well done
reminds me of when I was young and didn't know
how to express myself. |
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Re: all the things
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by brialuv on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 12:46:29 PM AEST
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| i definently knw wht ur talking about sometimes i sit and wonder the same thing but exactly like you said "with hope comes wait." |
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