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Broken & Alone
Contributed by
mysellf
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 10:40:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She’s innocent, an angel disguised as
A mere child, too young to be
Oppressed by malicious individuals,
Egotistical man who has no thoughts
No feelings of his fellow beings.
While they jeer and taunt she lies
Broken and alone, too scared to call
For help lest they return to finish what
They started. Hands clasped, the pain
Crippled her body, severely weakened
Thunder rattles around, chasing her
Through the nightmare; laughing, echoing.
The rain streams down the alley, washes
Away all the traces of this tragic event,
Blood stains the gutters around her.
Her once sparkling eyes glaze over
Illuminated by the flash of lightening
A lifeless body, of a former untroubled
Youth, a daughter, sister, friend
Now with us no more.
So explain the world, the horrors,
The pain which tears us down,
Corruption, bitterness and then,
In one moment of anger, hate, spite
One man can end it all!
Copyright ©
mysellf
... [
2010-06-23 10:40:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Broken & Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 12:19:42 PM AEST (User
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Can feel the utter anguish and sadness in this,tragic but beautifully written |
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Re: Broken & Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 12:24:08 PM AEST (User
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a wonderful but sad piece beautifully writen
well done. |
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Re: Broken & Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 01:50:36 PM AEST (User
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I feel the pain in this flow
well done. |
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Re: Broken & Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by SunshineySam on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 08:07:42 PM AEST (User
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The sheer pain of this is unbelievable. well written. |
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