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alcohol
Contributed by
yourselforsomeonelikeyou
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 08:30:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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somebody come hand me, a cold bottle of whiskey
ive been down so long, oh alcohol wont u lift me.
when im gone far away, oh world will you miss me
im done with girls, so whiskey come kiss me.
some want pearls, others want fishies
but a solemn cat like me, yea i want whiskey.
sometimes im stuck in the dirt, others im up and friskey
and if u ask my favorite drink, its a given ill say whiskey.
but when im down and poor, and lookin for a fix
i find a way to get some money, and then call my other chick.
she makes me feel like ive swallowed 1000 fires, shes lovely to me
but to you, micheal myers.
i cant catch my breath, cause alcohol consumes my airways
gaspin for air, hangin off my staircase.
without you im scared, i feel alone on the fairway
the further i go, the more this becomes and unfair day.
-T.L-
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Re: alcohol
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 09:11:56 PM AEST
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Powerful poem expressing the need to escape through alcohol. I hope life turns better for you. NIcely written poem.
Heidi |
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Re: alcohol
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by Pat346 on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 12:38:55 AM AEST
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Sounds like a great punk song. Love it.
Keep it up and good luck |
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Re: alcohol
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 12:35:55 AM AEST
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i can really relate...
take care
-K.Z. |
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