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Contributed by
mysellf
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 11:02:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Creeps upon you under the cover of night
Implores with puppy eyes not to fight
Tricks you into muttering him an invite
Imprisons your soul away from the light
Soon he will become your frowned upon friend
Carried with you each day until its end
It points out your doom that will surely impend
To make you succumb, for your will to bend
Soon you no longer exist
Until you try to resist
So slam the door in his face
And remove all of his trace
Only then will you be free
To live life as you want it to be
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by brialuv on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 11:49:18 AM AEST
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| this is deep and makes you think...great job! |
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 04:58:28 AM AEST
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| yes a very nice, deeply thought out, piece of writing. well done. |
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 02:01:50 PM AEST
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| Emotional torture captured beautifully |
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