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One Page After Another
Contributed by
landsleyalexandre
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Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 02:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am lost in the pages of my life
Which have been filled with ink from top to bottom
Sometimes, I swear I have it so hard
That I am banging my head against blank pages
With not enough spaces for me to jot it down
Man, I just have so much problems
And still that’s not even half of them
But why waste my time telling you
All the rubbish that I have been trough
With such pitiful words, I still would not be able to break it down for you
And let you know, what the weight of the world feels like on my shoulders
Tried to shake it off, but was almost crushed under
And not be able to share because no one really cares
No one, especially no real friend, really want to deal with such a burden
But I have found my way to ease my pain, words after words
Sentences stacked up on top of each other
I have let my pen bleed one page after another.
landsleyalexandre, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. This does not pertain or include your own poetry. Again, those comments have been removed.
As of this post, you have posted 25 poems with absolutely zero interactive comments.
You have apparently ignored the moderator notes left on your poems, Rebellious and Conquistadors. So, this is your last post until you, at the very least, bring your comments up. Do the math! 25 X 3.
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Re: One Page After Another
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by Zeberdee on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 02:36:40 PM AEST
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| Great, well written poem, I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: One Page After Another
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by brialuv on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 02:56:54 PM AEST
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| amazing poem !! |
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Re: One Page After Another
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 03:21:27 PM AEST
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| nice write...my pen is also how I let go and let flow all those things that are on the inside... |
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Re: One Page After Another
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 18th January 2011 @ 01:43:00 PM AEST
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| Great write,you and I seemingly share the same affliction ,sometimes writing's a blessing sometimes it's a curse. |
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