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Too Much On My Plate
Contributed by
landsleyalexandre
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Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 02:09:22 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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It’s been a while since I sat down, wrote it down, just because I needed to let it out entirely. I am losing, I can’t win feeling like the odds are against me. I am devastated, I think someone just took a knife and ran it trough me. Is this the feeling of loneliness that is once again getting to me? I have ran out of energy but I am force to keep on going, I am hurt, I want to cry and let myself drown in my own sorrow, my emotions are like sour dishes, with huge pieces which I can’t swallow, I am tired of the fancy recipes with the bitter taste of solitude that leaves me incomplete, I try to cough them up but so easily they get stuck and I end up on choking as if the rope around my neck has been tighten to the point that I can‘t breath so I am left gasping for air in a chance of surviving. The pressure is too much, and so are the meals that this life has been serving me, no, I won’t eat, I won’t take another piece of baloney, hell I rather vomit because there is just so much that I can handle and apparently too much on the menu.
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Re: Too Much On My Plate
(User Rating: 1 ) by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 07:21:04 AM AEST (User
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I like this, and I understand the heaviness of loneliness, good write.
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