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Sleeping Dragon
Contributed by
Obnoxious_Bread
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Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 01:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Cast in iron like a molten rock
a coin
a gear, a cog
a useful plastic wretch
My phantoms are common
my vision is shared
if brightness shines on me
the to all as well
My echoes are expected to be straight
my movements planned
strange shadows I see but don’t observe
nothing new, nothing dull, nothing good
But I can only be prodded for so long
the treasures of the unknown I smell
and I long to bathe in gold
I grow tired of this gray
when rich, red, tears of laughter around me are shed
Give me my wings to be unfolded
give me a horizon
burn this black and white picture
show me color instead
I will not be restrained
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Re: Sleeping Dragon
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 03:25:04 PM AEST
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| nice write...I see in this write the struggle that a lot of us most fight our way through... |
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Re: Sleeping Dragon
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 07:24:29 AM AEST
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I liked it, it shows strength and courage, stay strong.
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Re: Sleeping Dragon
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Saturday, 16th October 2010 @ 11:58:23 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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