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Reminds me of you
Contributed by
shahy
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Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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That little sketch reminds me of you
Of the way you used to draw me
And me not aware that you do
Of you pretending that its nothing
Smiling teasingly while you do
and then i saw it
that piece of paper you saw me through
my heart throbbed
my whole world shrank in to you
i could see clearly
how every small detail
you memorized through and through
And how i feel empty now
That suddenly i was drawn away from you
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2010-06-21 10:20:00]
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Re: Reminds me of you
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 12:32:08 PM AEST
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| a lovely well versed poem, keep them coming. |
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Re: Reminds me of you
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 07:28:00 AM AEST
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awsome picture, a special memory,
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