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Waterfall
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 07:21:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crystal-clear cascade,
plummeting to destiny,
bubbling descent
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-06-19 19:21:59]
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Re: Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 10:30:17 PM AEST
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Another classic haiku.
Tim
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Re: Waterfall
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 01:12:16 AM AEST
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| simply wonderfull. I am stood beneath watching this, can hear it, feel the spray on my skin. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Waterfall
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by fish on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 02:52:53 PM AEST
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i am becoming a fan of haiku's.
this a beautiful piece. i love it. |
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Re: Waterfall
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 12:50:17 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I like the alliteration on the first line - it flows well! |
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Re: Waterfall
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by Potpourri on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 12:28:34 AM AEST
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this is most beautiful.
potpourri
ty 4 visiting my page |
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