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Hey Sexy
Contributed by
brialuv
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Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 07:32:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Hey Sexy
Yea I'm talking to you
Don't you look away
Boy if you only knew the things I want to do
Hey Sexy
Ooo-wee you make me weak
That's why I studder and trip over my words when I speak
A flaw in you I seek
But nope there's not one I see
Hey Sexy
I dream of us making love
Under the night stars above
There's no greater thought
I just hope we don't get caught
Hey Sexy
I want to take your hand
And make you my gorgeous sexy man
I want to run away
And show you all the things I can't find the words to say
Hey Sexy
I can't believe I'm telling you this
But it's a chance; a opportunity
I just can't miss
Hey Sexy
"Live it up we aint going to live forever"
In English class you said that last September
Do you remember?
Hey Sexy
It started out with just a little crush
Now I don't look at it as such
Now I take it so much more serious
One might say I'm just delirious
Hey Sexy
I've known you for such little time
But in my heart I've already labeled you as mine.
Copyright ©
brialuv
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2010-06-19 07:32:18]
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Re: Hey Sexy
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by fish on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 10:13:45 AM AEST
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but for your note, i will think you actually feel this feelings about someone. the emotion is profound, the write is wonderful and the flow is a you-must-follow-me kind of flow.
this is a nice one my dear. |
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Re: Hey Sexy
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by ridethewingsofsalvation on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 01:12:46 PM AEST
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| As soon as I started reading this, the flow of the piece just made me keep reading. Great job. :) |
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Re: Hey Sexy
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 07:43:48 PM AEST
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Nicely written poem full of powerful emotion.
Heidi |
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Re: Hey Sexy
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by shahy on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 12:33:57 PM AEST
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| i loved it ,light and flowing and just keeps you on reading,nice job |
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Re: Hey Sexy
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by Eagle on
Saturday, 26th June 2010 @ 09:03:14 AM AEST
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| A nice stroy of unriquited love, flows freely. |
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