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I Love You Dad...

Contributed by jkailee on Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 01:49:22 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

Today is a complete tragedy
you passed away in your sleep peacefully
Thats why i've prepared this poetry
No more we, no more you and me
I am On the verge of insanity
killing me softly inside of my body
Screwing my mind and my mentality
making me Push on depressingly?
dont you think your acting irresponsibly
Theres so much you need to teach me
even though i'm thinking terribly
perhaps even a little selfishly
this isnt the way its suppose to be
how can i live on and be care free
What will happen to our family
Theres still so much you have to see
like when i marry my one and only
We cant truly be happy or live happily
for you rest only in our memories
so i dedicate this poem for you only
from your son and your wife Shirley
rest in peace XXXXXXX Lee

Sincerely, XXXXXXX Lee

PS: you truly are the best dad in the world...

and thats why i hate you for it...

making this hurt so much more...

But i cant balance the hate for it does not amount...

to the love we've built upon..

For i know you will forever shine on...

Protecting me and mom from harm...

I love you dad...

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Copyright © jkailee ... [ 2010-06-19 01:49:22]
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Re: I Love You Dad... (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 06:52:33 AM AEST
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very sad and touching nice.

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