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Stellar
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 11:14:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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someone moved the stars tonight
rearranged them overhead;
turned constellations inside out
so all the patterns can’t be read
the Southern Cross, inverted now
Antares, Rigel dimmed to mild;
Aries has wandered north, and
Pollux left an only child
seasons’ maps have all combined
Canis Major, now supine;
Mintaka a mere speck of light
on Orion’s Belt, a smidge too tight
on blackest cloth the diamonds wink
giving up their long shed light;
someone moved the stars around
but even so, they shine alright.
Copyright ©
spike
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2010-06-18 23:14:46]
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Re: Stellar
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 02:42:20 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful write! although I was indoors reading this, your words transported me out into the dark looking up to see the stars. thanks for posting. |
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Re: Stellar
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 12:24:49 PM AEST
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wow
I'm speechless
this flow is universal..... |
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