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A ray of light
Contributed by
Manic
on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 10:51:10 PM in AEST
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Looking at life, through wild staring eyes,
sentenced to sadness, wishing to fly,
away from all the sorrow and pain,
so many people you'll never see again,
keeping inside these feelings you hide,
love comes and goes just like the tide,
remembering , that in your heart you know,
real love deserves a place to go,
always quiet even when called,
silent , curiously observing all,
praying to find a ray of light,
to free you from this permanent night,
all these feelings of guilt and pain,
scared to even try again,
amused, you watch the happy faces,
content lovers holding hands going places,
secretly hoping that someday,
that ray of light will come your way,
love always pawned like a fake diamond ring,
life anew, changed so many things,
a broken life becomes true pain,
but really there is no need to complain,
for each day is a precious gift,
and sometimes spirits are hard to lift,
so for now keep dreaming that you might,
be shined on, by your ray of light.
R.S.S. june 19 2010.
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Re: A ray of light
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by brialuv on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 06:48:18 PM AEST
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| very true and inspiring ! i love it |
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Re: A ray of light
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 08:02:58 AM AEST
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| very nice write |
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Re: A ray of light
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by shahy on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 12:37:15 PM AEST
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| It wonderfully transferred your emotions , lovely |
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Re: A ray of light
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by quadira on
Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 03:47:40 PM AEST
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| from the heart i felt. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Re: A ray of light
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by M-LOU on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 01:42:42 PM AEST
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| Each day is a gift so is your ability to express your thoughts. A light is shining on you. |
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