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ALWAYS
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 12:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Please don't let me go
There are some things I need to know
Like, did you care?
Has your life been fair?
Through these sad, sad days
I'll stay with you always
Please don't let me go
You have more friends than foes
Keep hold of my hand
And I'll try to understand
Through these sad,sad days
I'll stay with you always
You close your eyes, you're at peace
I know you are safe, at least
Tears start to roll
Tears start to flow
I prayed...
You would never let me go
You don't know how much I miss you so
But in the end we fall
As time gets us all
Through the years and days
You'll stay with me always
Copyright ©
chrisdavid
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2010-06-17 00:06:53]
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Re: ALWAYS
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 06:44:59 AM AEST
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| One of the privileges of my job is to be with someone when they go, You have brought to the fore the peace, the sadness and the finality of unanswered questions,then the place you make in your heart for them as you carry on living well written |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by joe-joe on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 07:11:06 AM AEST
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| having lost people close to me, I know that they are always with me....nice write... |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by Potpourri on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 02:59:17 PM AEST
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Compellingly beautiful and
most revealing work, you
have here . . .
ty 4 visiting my page . . .
Potpourri |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by brialuv on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 03:46:19 PM AEST
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| nicely written i loved it ! |
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Re: ALWAYS
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 02:05:24 PM AEST
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Excellent flow
great topic |
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