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Granada
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The molding there,
above my door,
wears a crown,
forever more,
facing,
placing,
me in line,
I pray to the east,
site divine,
chase,
then race,
a foreign land,
forced from there,
back to sand.
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Re: Granada
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 01:13:39 AM AEST (User
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i like this very much, the rhyme and flow are very fluid, nice poem. |
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