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chocolate life
Contributed by
full_blur
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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think sweetly of chocolate life
but live deeply plunging the knife
muse quickly on each second of youth
but grow immensely with withering roots
love systmetically, intense on each thread
but kiss the rejection and step over the edge
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2003-04-15 21:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: chocolate life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Uncooked on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 09:53:57 PM AEST (User
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Wow! The way each line contradicts its precedent is amazing. Also your lack of capitalization and punctuation gives the actual look of the poem a timeless effect.
My favorite line of this is 'grow immensely with withering roots', its like holding onto something that will never stop fading away. Bravo
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