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Invasion
Contributed by
kessembi
on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 01:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A firm handshake... in
Trust blends with darkened sweat... out
Brutality... in
Thievery - short pause
Alone among the crowd... out
Silent screaming... in
Like everclear... out
Destroying a short song... in
Life spills on death... out
Copyright ©
kessembi
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2010-06-16 13:12:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Invasion
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:02:32 PM AEST (User
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Very interesting poem. I agree with its message. Nice use of contrasting ideas in this piece.
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Re: Invasion
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 01:15:24 AM AEST (User
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a really good, well thought out piece, thanks for sharing. |
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