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Welcome Back To Reality
Contributed by
mistersarang
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Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 12:50:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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With my back against the wall
Nowhere to seek and hide
I given up to you
A room full with laughter and joy can feel lonesome within my pain
Look down deep through my eyes, which are the windows of my soul
Go on look down within me, there lies the coldhearted
Numb but breathing to every word that comes out of your mouth
With every lie that is spoken
Im losing myself
The snow is falling quietly, i cant feel no more
Pain becomes my drug and you my darling becomes my addition.
Each heartache; i own to you
i come for more with every second, there burning to ashes.
With my head lowered down
I shall pay the price
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Re: Welcome Back To Reality
(User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:26:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. The sorrow takes on beauty through your poetic talents.
Heidi |
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Re: Welcome Back To Reality
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 01:18:37 AM AEST
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| so well writen, a sadness runs through the whole poem but there is a softness created by the way you use the words. really well done. |
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