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Shooting Star
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 08:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Once in a lifetime,
flashing across the night sky,
waiting for wishes
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Re: Shooting Star
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 01:10:00 AM AEST
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| well writen, i like this very much. |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:11:51 PM AEST
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Just keep looking at the skies.  |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 12:43:53 PM AEST
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Dear Heidi, I love your Haiku Poetry, and someday you will see a shooting star. It is absolutely amazing, because when it flys across the sky, you can't believe your eyes! You're sure they are deceiving you. Then it dawns on you.....I've just seen a "shooting star" and you never forget it!
I hope you see one soon.
Warm love
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Re: Shooting Star
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by yourselforsomeonelikeyou on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 12:39:27 AM AEST
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| if you find the time, listen to a song titled "shooting star" by a band named "air traffic". |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 12:48:22 PM AEST
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They are truly amazing to see. Look out for a great display on 12th August.
Nice haiku. |
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