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Goodbye
Contributed by
marepenguinbear
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Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 06:16:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Why am I thinking so hard about life?
People walk their lives rough or smooth
But mine, I walk like a blind man
My life is just becoming too complicated
Why am I alone from the rest of the world?
Will I reach my dream like the others?
I am lost at my own thoughts
Deciding who I am and who I wan to be
This is not part of my life; it is the way I walk
This part would be the hardest: live or die
My options are very limited in my life
What will I really want to choose?
Giving up my life for the others to be happy
I think that would be my best excuse for dying
No one will really know until the days come
But once I die will I be forgotten?
Would the others want me back again?
My best and simple answer is NO
I made their lives complicated enough
It ends here with my first and last poem
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Re: Goodbye
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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Then is so sad. You really should stick around and help us write. I write to live.
Nothing personal intended but suicide is very selfish. I'm sure you'd be missed a lot more than you can ever know.
Like I said there's plenty writing to do. Stick around and help us out here. You'd be great at it 'cause you convinced me that this exactly what you said it would be.
Huggs, prayer, blessings,
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Re: Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 10:06:30 AM AEST
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| ao.. i like it.. keep on writing.. n_n |
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Re: Goodbye
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by mistersarang on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 08:33:40 PM AEST
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| i wont leave ! i told you unni |
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