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Addiction through my eyes
Contributed by
NicoleMichelle
on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 10:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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what have you ever done for me?
you're not the mother you should be,
the word "mother" is quite symbolic,
but you'd rather live up to the word alcoholic,
you introduced me to a substance called crack,
immediately hooked, there was no going back,
we would be out copping for hours at a time,
doing our sick, sneaky little crime,
you'd hand me the pipe saying, "take a hit,"
i wondered if i would ever be able to quit,
we would spend our days drinking,
an endless pit, i was sinking,
our nights were in lancaster copping,
one hit, no chance of stopping,
bouncing from dealer to dealer,
where was my spiritual healer?
you would take me against my will,
couldn't you see that i was ill?
you would take me into the woods, far away,
making me wonder if i would see another day,
this is where you would cheat and sleep with your men,
locking me in the van as if it were my pen,
there was no more than a ten foot distance,
and you were aware of my existence,
how could you do this to my father?
this is a troublesome and immense bother,
i was petrifyed to say what was going on,
hoping this nightmare would end by dawn,
your screaming turned to hitting,
and this i am admitting,
the bruises covered me whole,
as if i was no longer nicole,
you were in complete control,
ripping apart my very soul,
to replace the hurt, i'd snort cocaine,
it did numb me of all the pain,
i would watch you do line after line,
five, six, seven, eight, nine,
nine lines and your set to go,
could this ever end, oh no,
from this stage, we'd hit the bar,
mother and daughter, quite bizarre,
for i was only the mere age of fifteen,
doing horrible things with my mother, kathleen.
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Re: Addiction through my eyes
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 10:18:11 AM AEST
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| quite a revealing write...But I hope putting pen to paper will help you, and all of us who will take the time to read... |
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Re: Addiction through my eyes
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 11:27:16 AM AEST
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| quite a fantastic write, very revealing and so sad, please write some more. |
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Re: Addiction through my eyes
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 11:47:58 AM AEST
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Very well done a work, and infinitely sad.
Let us pray this is not reality. and if,
that the Lord will show a way out of the pit.
Blessigs
Elizabneth |
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Re: Addiction through my eyes
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by MsAntonishaThomas on
Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 01:16:49 PM AEST
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WOW such immense potential to write... this poem is such a poetic desire to write...u made me feel as if i was there...just keep on writing ur blessings will come sooner r later..
~!* LOVE signed out : HATRED *!~ |
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Re: Addiction through my eyes
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by jordanarce17 on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 12:11:01 PM AEST
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it is amazing. i sorry that had to happen. i know how it feels for a mother on drugs. keep on writing
it takes the pain away. god bless |
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Re: Addiction through my eyes
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by amber_vonHorror on
Thursday, 28th October 2010 @ 03:04:37 AM AEST
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| wow this is amazing. it made my heart just about stop. well done for being the person you are now. youve been given this gift to help others. you're beautiful. |
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