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Make Believe
Contributed by
prophet
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Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 07:34:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Make believe my misery is more than just a simple plea
A plea to save my sanity for the rest of my eternity
eternity of misery thats hard for me to bare to see
you see this plea that lies in me is more than just make believe
believe me when i cease to breathe that all i want is to be free
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Re: Make Believe
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 08:34:13 AM AEST
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| interesting write...Although I believe that at one time or another everyone has thought about ending life, even as sound as I think I am occasionally when my times are really bad, I think about being free... |
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Re: Make Believe
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by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 08:55:55 AM AEST
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| i liked your repetiton, it was a tounge twister=) |
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Re: Make Believe
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by LadyRose on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 05:27:44 AM AEST
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| I LIKE THIS,sounds like something I can relate to.... |
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Re: Make Believe
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by neverlosehope on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 03:44:12 AM AEST
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| your poem is really interesting. i can relate...so you're not alone...stay strong. things can and WILL get better. stay positive. hang in there xxx |
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