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The Smell of roses
Contributed by
lothas
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Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 01:54:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The Smell of roses filled the air
Morning dew hung on the trees
None of these things could take my mind off you
Beautiful is an insult that doesn’t do you justice
Walking through the park; you’re the only thing that’s in my mind nothing else
To love someone this much is great
To care deeply about you is lovely
What can be said about your beauty?
No smile can compare to yours no one’s eyes can compare to you; yours shining beauty fills them; seeking a way to blind me; looking into them is like you taking a hold of me; gorgeous are… not beautiful not lovely but drop dead gorgeous; the stars shine off your eyes as you look at me and I at you
Some people say they found the one but I really have you are everything I want you’re everything I care about
I love you; not love… I deeply love you; I’m stronger with you in my life, my heartbeats for you
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In the darkness you light my way; finding your open arms holding you close to me whispering in you ears of how much you mean to me; how much I love you… always love you; kiss your soft lips still holding still holding.
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Re: The Smell of roses
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:50:58 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful. I hope my love feels like this about me. It conveys deep love perfectly.
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Re: The Smell of roses
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 03:06:54 PM AEST
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| Wow another sweet poem just keep on using that gift you have I know you will. |
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Re: The Smell of roses
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Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 04:17:52 AM AEST
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| Wow what a out standing write you do have a gift and you know how to make the words come out just right always use that gift you have just keep writing. |
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