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The trail of tears
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Sunday, 13th June 2010 @ 11:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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America, I love
The valley of your breasts
At low tide
How your inlets shatter silver
Against the sunlight’s
Spoiled and broken
Hypodermic shore
How your stillborn skies
Still burn at the concrete boundaries
Of towering forests
America, I love
The sweep of your congested skylines
How your cities stretch
Black fields
Across honey-suckle blue
How your indefinable love
Still murmurs at the edge
Of primordial sands
Stained white with lies
And another mans dreams
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iodinelove
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2010-06-13 23:55:25]
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Re: The trail of tears
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 02:11:25 AM AEST
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| Abraham, this is a really good piece, I love your descriptive way with words. thanks for posting. |
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Re: The trail of tears
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 08:38:52 AM AEST
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| very nice write...I love America also, even with our dark and bloody history, we are still in my eyes the best thing going... |
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Re: The trail of tears
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 02:12:07 AM AEST
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A good write but you can't beat good old England!!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: The trail of tears
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 08:25:38 PM AEST
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Abraham, this is "Exquisite Delight!" I feel the very same way that you do........could there ever be a more beautiful land ever?
Loved your very inspirational poem!
Warm love
consue |
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