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My brain's off-switch
Contributed by
essential
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Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 02:15:22 PM in AEST
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Only the deafening force of alcohol
Erases questions from my mind
The cold drink on the rocks
Is nothing but my brain's off-switch
And when the last drop is gulped in
I leave the world behind
And what I cursed so brief before
Is what me keeps bewitched
Whether I just do it to forget the time
Or whether it's already addiction
I can not see the crossover
And even less why I should care
Why sould I live the real thing
When I prefer the fiction
When soberness captures me here
And this can get me anywhere
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Re: My brain's off-switch
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 13th June 2010 @ 11:31:47 PM AEST
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| if you don't know the difference, it's addiction |
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Re: My brain's off-switch
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by patrick247 on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 07:24:15 AM AEST
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THIS POEM MAKES A LOT OF SENSE TO ME AS I FIND MYSELF SWITCHING OFF MORE AND MORE,
IM SURE IM GONNA SWITCH OFF FOR GOOD SOON
AND NOT BE ABLE TO SWITCH BACK ON....
I BETTER KEEP MY SELF IN THE STANDBY MODE WITH SOME INSTRUCTIONS TO SWITCH ME BACK ON CLOSE BY, ....TATTOOD ON MY HEAD,
COS I MIGHT NOT ACTUALLY BE DEAD |
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Re: My brain's off-switch
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 03:49:08 PM AEST
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Certainly is thought provoking.
The way we find our own escape sometimes is hard to explain, we all have our own ways.
Steve |
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Re: My brain's off-switch
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by kcrysten on
Tuesday, 8th November 2011 @ 02:21:03 PM AEST
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| I can truly relate. I am not addicted, but I definitly use alcohol on my weekends to let myself go and not feel the full impact of life and it's pain |
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Re: My brain's off-switch
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by lisasolorio1 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 12:50:22 PM AEST
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Its nice to be able to exscape all the bad stuff that goes on in life!
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