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INSOMNIA
Contributed by
paul427
on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 03:35:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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In the darkest region of my brain
A somber eye swollen with pain
Begins to shed salty tears again
Some seep through cracks
On dilapidated walls of shattered dreams
Others burn through misty reason like sunbeams
They drip into a puddle in a rhythmic beat
One after the other from the crow’s feet
This insane chant to endlessly repeat:
-Awake, alert, aware-
Of my wrath beware
The green-eyed monster
Will break its chain
Feed on your brain
Drive you insane
-Tap, tap, tap-
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Re: INSOMNIA
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 04:49:59 AM AEST
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| this is so well expressed, i like it a lot, look forward to more. |
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Re: INSOMNIA
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 05:32:48 AM AEST
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| I agree very well expressed with some great lines, good piece of writing |
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Re: INSOMNIA
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 04:32:14 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: INSOMNIA
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 08:05:58 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love your style!!! |
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