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Forever Or Never, Eternal
Contributed by
marepenguinbear
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Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 03:57:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You took my hand and said “I love you”
There was nothing to say, speechless
Who would have known?
My eyes glimmered with tears of joy
All I had to say was two words
I hadn’t, it ruined my life
We don’t see each other anymore
No more hellos or goodbyes
Not even love
My world collapsed after you left
You took half of my heart
I had taken nothing from you
Was I stupid?
Why couldn’t I say two simple words?
Now I’m empty inside
The times we shared
The memories we cherished
They were all wasted
The only one who understood me is gone
You will never come back
Never ever
You walked away without turning back
You heard my cries but didn’t care
I guess love is working its charms
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Re: Forever Or Never, Eternal
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by MoonlitSilverWolf on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 04:06:09 PM AEST
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| awesome write ~MSW |
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Re: Forever Or Never, Eternal
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 06:34:58 PM AEST
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I know how you feel.
Keep writing.
Always, Abraham |
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Re: Forever Or Never, Eternal
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by Lee on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 07:01:43 PM AEST
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a life lived is not necessarily a life wasted.
that's what i've come to look at things.
nice piece |
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Re: Forever Or Never, Eternal
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 03:39:15 AM AEST
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I found this one a little sad but well written.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Forever Or Never, Eternal
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 12:02:41 PM AEST
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wow....so poignant and well written. i think it's up to you to move on esp. if the other has done so already, but of course theres always that chance with the same person or someone new
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Forever Or Never, Eternal
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by mistersarang on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 08:32:45 PM AEST
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tehe i love when you tell me the poems then i go find them lmao
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