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The rain drops are falling
Contributed by
takeahittariq
on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 10:41:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I’m sitting in the eerie silence of my empty house.
Reminiscing, just reminiscing
I’m accompanied by the violent rain as it pummels my dining room window
Tip tip tap. Tap tap tapping relentlessly.
The rain drops thump the glass then race their way to the bottom
Swerving slipping and sliding as they go...
My memories of the past are washed away as the rain stops
The grey clouds clear away and so does my mind
Trouble free,
Now.
Not in my daze, I’m back to reality.
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Re: The rain drops are falling
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 06:43:11 PM AEST
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Excellent Poem
Always, abraham
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Re: The rain drops are falling
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 04:24:23 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: The rain drops are falling
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 10:21:44 AM AEST
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| nice write...I love the rain, and where it can take you in the heart... |
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