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Depths of my soul.
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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From the depths of my soul,
where the love bleeds,
theres an empty hole,
from my wants & needs,
from the waters to the land,
where I dwell,
reaching for a hand,
when my dreams fell,
from the air to the ground,
where we so go,
our feelings stick around,
never easy to show,
From the depths of my soul,
and to the beyond,
reaching to set a goal,
drifting in rivers & ponds,
from the heart deep within,
that no one sees,
is some what lonely & dim,
blowing in the breez,
The depths of my soul,I can hide,
behind my smile,
loosing all with my pride,
floating in the Nile!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-04-15 18:05:00]
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:22:22 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 09:20:50 PM AEST
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i love the over-all feeling of this poem, and your heart's depth of love in comparison to water, delightful, and deep within'...the breezes in your deepest heart, brilliant:) hugs nessa
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:06:25 AM AEST
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Beautiful
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:25:28 AM AEST
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| Very good write.. venkat |
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:31:48 AM AEST
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Great poem. I love the flow and the imagery.
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 11:07:05 PM AEST
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Very good write. I enjoyed this very much.
Sharon;) |
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 09:53:28 AM AEST
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| a strange but interesting poem, thought provoking but i love the feel of it |
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 02:58:59 PM AEST
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| A nice one, Christina. Wonder where some of those thoughts came from! Friend Bizzy |
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Re: Depths of my soul.
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:02:08 PM AEST
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| A delightful poem Christina .... really enjoyed this one of yours ... a change of style that I really like ... Jan |
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