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ten minutes in the snow
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
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"close your eyes, little wife
peer upon a blanket of snow
tilt your lips up to mine
and embrace this husband of your choosing"
dressed in black and blood red velvet
boots war-torn below her knees
red hair glistening with snowflakes
a spiked collar encircles her nape
the pines so tall and majestic
a magickal river runs below
peace and serenity in this small valley
piercing blue eyes stare down at the witch
snow white fingers fold into cherokee hands
his cargo jeans rustling in the quiet storm
she touches his cheek so softly
as rings of white-gold become one
this tiny moment frozen in time
where husband and wife hear only their hearts beat
a mystickal journey can take ten minutes
yes, for this, it is worth it
april 14, 2003
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:24:13 PM AEST
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very beautiful
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:37:37 PM AEST
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| your poem is so charming and delightful thank you for sharing this special moment in time with us:) hugs nessa |
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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Ahhh...sounds magical!!!!
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:08:14 AM AEST
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Romantic and full of love.Well done
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 01:28:43 AM AEST
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| ery beautiful and very happy. venkat |
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:27:08 PM AEST
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Just popped over to admire the view
thought "the gang" might be here to
a lovely scene so crisp and clear
70 farenheit over here.
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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| Lovely ... wonderful images and beautifully written ... Jan |
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 06:37:21 AM AEST
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Hello, LadyDama, A beautiful poem! An opportunity seized! A memory for eternity!
Friend Bizzy |
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Re: ten minutes in the snow
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 04:08:56 PM AEST
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ah, what a beautiful scene, and how cleverly you have portrayed it. Wonderful.
x_x_x |
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