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Teacher Ate my Homework????
Contributed by
ankoo
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Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 10:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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My teacher ate my homework,
which I thought was rather odd.
He sniffed at it and smiled
with an approving sort of nod.
He took a little nibble—
it’s unusual, but true—
then had a somewhat larger bite
and gave a thoughtful chew.
I think he must have liked it,
for he really went to town.
He gobbled it with gusto,
and he wolfed the whole thing down.
He licked off all his fingers,
gave a burp, and said, “You pass.”
I guess that’s how they grade you
when you’re in a cooking class.
Written by,
Ankeeta Paul.
Copyright ©
ankoo
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2010-06-09 22:42:06]
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 11:23:38 PM AEST
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| Really enjoyed this made me giggle well written |
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by spud on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 11:53:37 AM AEST
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Hi,
Well crafted and wonderfully humorous.
You kept us waiting as to why a teacher would
behave so strangely - and then the punchline .....
it's a cookery class! Clever .......
Tommy
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by quadira on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 09:18:23 AM AEST
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| great little poem. Love the humour and great ending. My son loved it. |
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by Maygee on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:49:27 PM AEST
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| Haha I thought that was really funny :) Very enjoyable to read and had I children I'd read it to them =] |
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by Bexstasy on
Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 02:34:55 PM AEST
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Lol, that's really really great!
Well done! |
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by FLStatePoetryAmbassador on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 08:04:21 AM AEST
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Amazing Ankeeta! You bring back so many childhood memories when I used to always use this as an excuse. Awesome job on your stanza, staying on your topic, and choice of words.
Great job alltogether!!! |
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Re: Teacher Ate my Homework????
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th May 2012 @ 11:50:36 AM AEST
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Heeheehee.  |
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