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loving you...how hard could it be??? :)
Contributed by
MsAntonishaThomas
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Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 01:16:04 PM in AEST
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loving you....is like giving up part of my soul...
cuz when i love .. you i give up part me....
trusting you is like giving my heart...
cuz i put my all into it...
in order for us to be....
but then you once betrayled me.....
~! signed out : NISHA !~
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2010-06-09 13:16:04]
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Re: loving you...how hard could it be??? :)
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by fish on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 04:21:25 PM AEST
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nice concept and choice of words, but sweet heart i think your poem will be more easy to read and digest if only you will edit it, there are typos, or so i think.
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Re: loving you...how hard could it be??? :)
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by Potpourri on
Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 04:55:10 AM AEST
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what truth you share in this poem,
one gets more than honesty from
it, one gets a sence of true devotion
and commitment, i loved it . . .
ty 4 visiting my page . . .
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