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Liquid Love
Contributed by
applethoughtrotten
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 01:14:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Tis' liquid love I have for sale.
A specialty made for you.
Flavored spirits, Whisky and Ale.
Hard Apple Cider too.
Tis' liquid love I have for sale.
Taste the sweet surrender.
You'll never need to travel far
to feel all warm and tender.
Tis' liquid love that will break your heart.
Leave you at the isle.
Rip you up, tear you apart.
Flat broke and defiled.
Tis' liquid love that will kill your dreams.
Take all you have from you.
With liquid love the Devil beams.
You're alone, a complete an utter fool.
Tis' liquid love I have for sale.
Quench all that you desire.
Three cold meals, a cot in jail
and a place in Satans Fire.
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Re: Liquid Love
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by alasdaircairns on
Wednesday, 9th June 2010 @ 02:02:58 PM AEST
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| Wow sums up the dark side of booze to a tee. Lovely rhyme and flow-highly enjoyable :) |
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Re: Liquid Love
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by joe-joe on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 03:37:08 PM AEST
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| brought back memories of long, long ago, so glad to have overcome "liquid love"...nice write... |
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Re: Liquid Love
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by SunshineySam on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 07:40:28 PM AEST
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| "Liquid Love" - love the alliteration. Definitely sheds light on "liquid love" and the truth behind it. Well done. |
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