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My Mission
Contributed by
karoody
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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if for one moment
my words ring true
all the way from my heart
my fears and pain
these foolish mistakes
on paper for you to see
horrid as they may seem
this tainted soul of mine
drawn with metaphors
told in time
maybe if someone hears
they may see my errors
learn from them
vowing never to follow this path
or maybe find understanding
and feel better about their plight
no longer would i think
this life to be in vain
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-04-15 15:45:00]
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Re: My Mission
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:55:49 PM AEST
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Wow..how could you think like this?? You're so special grrl...life is never in vain....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: My Mission
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:10:50 PM AEST
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| words spoken in a beautiful poem only a true poetess could write, much love and hugs always nessa |
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Re: My Mission
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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words well written...you a special and very talented...believe in yourself
Sharon |
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Re: My Mission
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:34:45 PM AEST
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| wow.. good stuff. |
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Re: My Mission
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:41:17 AM AEST
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| I say that your soul is not tainted. just it is tinted with various types of human emotions... which are very common.. be confident your mission will be fullfilled. venkat |
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Re: My Mission
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:18:12 PM AEST
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I think that we all feel like this time to time.Thank you kara for sharing such a deep and wonderful poem
kat |
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Re: My Mission
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:22:40 PM AEST
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very poetic I enjoyed reading this lots of truth my mind draws a blank...
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: My Mission
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 02:41:51 PM AEST
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kara, this is amazing, just beautiful...you captured how everyone feels about their "foolish mistakes"...mission completed!
Lindsey |
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Re: My Mission
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 03:13:12 PM AEST
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very beautifully written kara... i believe as others do that you are not tainted but filled with empty spaces that are bein filled...everyone is born with a clean slate and its justa matter of time before they fill it up... we may not possess an eraser for our slates but we can fill the slate with better brighter caligraphy to show right from wrong
-Sid |
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Re: My Mission
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by vincy on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:49:56 PM AEST
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There is benovelence in here
that is where the poet, the poem and the reader
cann have cause for celebration. |
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