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THE SUN
Contributed by
fish
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Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 04:47:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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She rises with grace and glory
Splendour, grandeur and purity
Dawdling her east-to-west route
With familiarity and majesty till her root
Radiating generously and ceaselessly all day
We see her east-westing
But none see her returning
When she is in rich golden attire
She is ready to retire
We wish in vain she stays
I cling to my window bars
That looks to her path
When at last she comes
There is this song I hum
Grace, beauty, humility and majesty are but a few words from this song.
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Re: THE SUN
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 07:32:26 AM AEST
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| i like this very much. I love the wild places and being at one with the natural world and this is a well thought out poem about the natural things around us. thanks for posting. |
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Re: THE SUN
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 01:16:40 PM AEST
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Exquisite Deiight Fish............Marvelous description of our wondrous Sun. I love the song you also hum!
Whatever in this world would we do without
the warmth from our beauteous Sun. In the Bible is a language called, "The Pure Language, and the Sun denotes our Loving Creator.......isn't that beautiful too?
Loved your poem Fish............very much!
Warm love,
consue |
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Re: THE SUN
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by deepviolet on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 06:17:40 PM AEST
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| i especially like the structure of this poem, and how the last line of each stanza doesn't quite fit with the others--it makes it interesting to read. you also did a nice job opening this piece of nature to new interpretations. 'majesty' is a word that certainly must describe the sun! |
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