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Hell

Contributed by thebadguy9999 on Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 08:34:29 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

In a dream I saw Jesus and he took me through Hell.
He said pay close attention,For these horrors you must tell.
He led me through a gate of the size I've never seen.
He said it has to be this big son, the world is so unclean.
As we entered through the gate i saw flames that ran for miles.
I saw people in the flames of all colors,creeds and styles.
I heard the worst kind of pains that have ever touched my ears.
It was like all horrors and nightmares wrapped up within all fears.
The people prayed to God,Please release us from our pain.
Others prayed to him for a single drop of rain.
Jesus said, there's no release from the torments of this place.
They are all alone here,They've been removed from grace.
I thought that some had died,I watched them take their final breath.
Instantly they all revived because here there is no death.
I saw Mamas and Daddies who were with their sons and daughters.
The kids were screaming through their pain,Of Christ you never taught us.
I heard the cries of mothers who were worried for their kids.
They cried,I hope that they're in Heaven and did not choose the path I did.
they said sir please tell my loved ones to avoid this evil place.
That made my heart so heavy I could not look them face to face.
I stood there for an hour and still did not understand.
Why every few minutes the size of Hell had to expand.
Jesus said they have turned from me,In sin they do explore.
With tears in his eyes he said this cannot happen anymore.
I'm going to get my children,I will be back in a flash.
In the twinkling of an eye I heard chains begin to clash.
Jesus brought me to a place that was separate but the same.
There Satan and his demons were chained within the flame.
Satan saw Jesus there and his name he did blaspheme.
With the twitch of my Lords hand,Man did Satan scream.
Jesus said go now,Tell my people what you saw while you were here.
The way they are living makes hell a place that they should fear.

Copyright © thebadguy9999 ... [ 2010-06-07 20:34:29]
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Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 10:00:42 PM AEST
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again, it's good, but you should try to avoid forced rhymes. it's a trap. write naturally and the rhymes and a general flow will occur naturally as well.

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