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.....free-style...
Contributed by
MsAntonishaThomas
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Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 05:04:20 PM in AEST
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love is like a flower
it needs time to grow...
deep in the roots of the ground...
at times it may be hard to show...
tell me what to do when you feel as if youre in the big world alone
with no heart to heart...
or were true feelings are never showned....
when your days are always gray....
when your heart is filled with sorrow and pain.....
when it seems theirs no ending to this mysterious painful rain
when friends turn on you....
and family does the same....
it's pitaful how they treat a 14 yr. old girl with no love
b/c their afraid to love....
and filled with guilt and shame...
when your whole life is filled with tragic of the past....
presence are exactly the same
i feel as if im giving in on hope....
b/c nothings going rite...
there's somthing wrong when a girl cry's herself to sleep ev'ry night.....
getting concieved at such a young age...
all that runs threw us teens mind is get a termination....
but please let me put my 2 cents in it...
plus a lil change of my own accusations....
where would you be if your mom would have aborted you....
you love your life im sure of....
so why do it to anyone when they have just as much chances of experiencing life as you do.....
when my heart is filled with sorrow and dispair....
theres nothing left to do but pray...
that the lord would help me survive another day...
when times get rough the devil try's to trick me to not trust in the LORD...
and what he said he was gone do
but i no not to be a fool of that b/c i have witness it to...
i believe in GOD trust me i do...but what do you do when it seems as if everthing/everone just done gave up on you....!!!!!
~singed out: NISHA~
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Re: .....free-style...
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 06:04:41 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! DEAR........Roses at your feet. You are a wonderful poet. Your emotions you express well on paper, and I could feel your sadness, and your despair!
Don't let that evil Satan change your faith, for that's exactly what he is trying to do. Hang on, Hang on for your life.......He'll hold you in his arms of love, for he truly does love you!
WELCOME, to YPDC, you're going to love it here. And we're so glad to have you a board!
Keep up your writing, it will help you to stay positive, and we'll build you up too!
Warm love
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Re: .....free-style...
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by Cindy359 on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 05:45:40 PM AEST
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This is a lovely write...thanks for sharing this with us. I hope to read more in the future.
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