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Mistress
Contributed by
NadineP
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Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 02:56:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Green are my eyes
as i look upon the bride
beautifull in white
in black i look alright
mourning a love gone too soon
whilst sitting,watching a new one bloom
She does not know what grows in my womb.
His own flesh and blood he will deny
when our love making was indeed no lie
the message will be brutal as the delivery is kind
as he sits his wife down and tells her I've lost my mind
she will be confused as tears will run down her cheeks
I tell my self not to worry
the evidence will be here within weeks.
it just had to be a boy
another little him
their looks uncanny , tall, dark haired and slim
the nurse comes in holding him and his medical chart
i cant help but think he will be like his father
and break an innocent heart.
Copyright ©
NadineP
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2010-06-07 14:56:49]
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Re: Mistress
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by MsAntonishaThomas on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 03:11:42 PM AEST
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| GUDE!!!! wadt a beautiful asset....!!!! kant b leave idt!!!! budt as adey sae ev'ry 1 hax a diff'rent storiie tewh tell....nd sum r jux deep'r den othat'x |
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Re: Mistress
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by fish on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 07:27:30 PM AEST
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| my dear what should i say, nemesis i guess. this is a beautiful piece of art, i love it, keep it coming. |
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Re: Mistress
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by ratty on
Monday, 7th June 2010 @ 08:02:15 PM AEST
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| Art poetry! Love it! |
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Re: Mistress
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by JRLatin77 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 03:51:05 AM AEST
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What can I say.
A mixture of poetry and soap opera, but you've turned it into art. I think it's a great piece. |
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Re: Mistress
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by Cindy359 on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 05:30:41 AM AEST
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First of all ...I am sorry it took so long to get back to you.
The words here are not only words, they have painted a image in my head as if I was watching this happen. This is a real art that you have ,something to be proud of . I wish you all the best in the future ...I am looking forward to reading your words...
Take care of yourself..
Cindy |
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